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교정강사 Niah(C)
등록일 2021-05-27
작성글 A. What gives you stress these days? Explain your answer.
I think my final-exam is the first reason. and my friends are the reason,too. Because one of my friend makes me tired.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(05/27/21)

-컴퓨터만 샀니?
-슬프게도 그랬어. 난 정말 바이크 라이더 게임기를 사고 싶었는데.
-그런데 그거 너무 비싸더라.돈을 모아서 살 거야.
-Did you just buy a computer?
-Sadly, it was. I really wanted to buy a bike rider game.
-But it was too expensive. I will save my money.
교정내용

A. What gives you stress these days? Explain your answer.

I think my final-exam is the first reason.  (Correct)

and my friends are the reason,too. Because one of my friend makes me tired. --> Also, my friends are the reason, too, because on of my friends makes me tired.

 => Corrected: The sentence structure is corrected.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(05/27/21)

 

-컴퓨터만 샀니?

-슬프게도 그랬어. 난 정말 바이크 라이더 게임기를 사고 싶었는데.

-그런데 그거 너무 비싸더라.돈을 모아서 살 거야.

-Did you just buy a computer?  (Correct)

 

-Sadly, it was. I really wanted to buy a bike rider game.  --> Sadly, I did. I really wanted to have Bike Rider.

 => Corrected: The sentence is corrected gramatically.

 

-But it was too expensive. I will save my money. (Correct)​​

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