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제 목 2021.05.27. homework
교정강사 Noemi(C)
등록일 2021-05-27
작성글 A. What kind of diet would you recommend to your friend? Why?
I usually have recommended healthy kind of food to my friends.
Because many illness comes from eating bad food, collaboration high fat and Carbohydrate. for example, pizza, sauce chicken and so on.
So I recommend to my friends eat green food, eat nuts, eat meats containing low fat.


B. Make these sentences into English.
-그것은 쉽게 불이 붙어요. It catch fire easily.
-시대에 뒤쳐지게 될 거야. You will fall behind the times.
-학기 중에 수강과목을 취소해도 되나요? Can I cancel coursework during the semester?
교정내용

A. What kind of diet would you recommend to your friend? Why?

I usually have recommended healthy kind of food to my friends.

  => I usually ​recommend healthy kinds of food to my friends.​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.    

 

Because many illness comes from eating bad food, collaboration high fat and Carbohydrate. 

  => Because, many illnesses come from eating bad food, like food that is rich in fat and carbohydrates.

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   

 

for example, pizza, sauce chicken and so on.

  => For example: pizza, sauced chicken, and so on.

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   

 

So I recommend to my friends eat green food, eat nuts, eat meats containing low fat.

  => So, I recommend eating green food, nuts, and meat that contains low fat to my friends.

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

-그것은 쉽게 불이 붙어요. It catch fire easily.

  => It catches fire easily.
  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.  

 

-시대에 뒤쳐지게 될 거야. You will fall behind the times. ✔   

 

 

-학기 중에 수강과목을 취소해도 되나요? Can I cancel coursework during the semester?​ 

  => May I drop a course during the semester?​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   

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