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제 목 Should the Benin Bronzes be returned to Nigeria at this time?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-05-30
작성글 A.) Should the Benin Bronzes be returned to Nigeria at this time?

Taking properties against their owners' will could be likened to robbery.
All criminal proceeds must be returned to robbed countries or persons.
So the Benin Bronzes can't be an exception.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(05/24/21)

-귀사가 만 개까지 그 수를 늘린다면 5퍼센트 할인해 드리겠습니다.
If your company increases the number to 10,000, we will give you 5% discount.

-귀하가 제안한 가격이 너무 높습니다.
The price you offerred is too high.

-그것은 저희가 찾는 가격대가 아닙니다.
It is not the price band we are looking for.
교정내용

A.) Should the Benin Bronzes be returned to Nigeria at this time? 

 

Taking properties against their owners' will could be likened to robbery.

All criminal proceeds must be returned to  robbed countries or  persons.

So the Benin Bronzes can't be  an exception.

 

Yes, taking properties against their owners' will could be likened to robbery. All criminal proceeds must be returned to the robbed countries or persons. So the Benin Bronzes can't be an exception.

 

 

 B.) Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (05/24/21)

 

-귀사가 만 개까지 그 수를  늘린다면 5퍼센트 할인해 드리겠습니다.

If  your company  increases  the number to 10,000,  we will  give  you  5% discount.

 

=> We could give a 5 percent discount if you care to raise your order by 10,000 units.

-귀하가 제안한 가격이 너무 높습니다.

The price you offerred is too high.

 

=>The price you offered is too high.

 

-그것은 저희가 찾는 가격대가 아닙니다.

It is not the price band we are looking for.

 

=>The price is not within the price range we're looking for.

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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