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제 목 Should people in France commemorate Napoleon’s legacy?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-05-30
작성글 A.) Should people in France commemorate Napoleon’s legacy? Why or why not?

Napoleon is said to be decisive.
He contribited for the inspiration of French revolution to spread to other countries.
But he was a warmonger who inspired people nationalism which is dangerous to break world peace.
So his legacy must be avandoned.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(05/26/21)

-귀사와의 오랜 거래를 고려해서 받아들이겠습니다.
We will accept it in consideration of long business with you..

-가격에 뭐가 포함되어 잇나요?
What does the price cover?

-귀사의 가격은 FOB와CIF비용을 포함하나요?
Does your price cover the cost of FOB and CIF?
교정내용

A.) Should people in France commemorate Napoleon’s legacy? Why or why not?

 

Napoleon is said to be decisive. 

He contribited  for  the  inspiration of  French revolution  to spread to other countries.

But he was a warmonger who inspired  people nationalism which is dangerous to break world peace.

So his legacy must be avandoned.

 

=> Napoleon is said to be decisive. He contributed  to  the  inspiration of  the French revolution  to spread to other countries.
But he was a warmonger who inspired  people, nationalism which is dangerous to break world peace. So his legacy must be abandoned.

 B.) Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (05/26/21)

 

-귀사와의 오랜 거래를 고려해서 받아들이겠습니다.

We will accept it in consideration of  long business with you..

 

OR 

=> Taking into account our long business relationship with you.

-가격에 뭐가 포함되어 잇나요?

What does the  price cover?

 

OR 

=> What is included in your price?

-귀사의 가격은 FOB와CIF비용을 포함하나요?

Does  your price cover the cost of FOB and CIF?

 

OR 

=> Do your prices include FOB and CIF?

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• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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