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제 목 Writing homework(21.5.31)
교정강사 Sarah(C)
등록일 2021-05-31
작성글 Q;Do you like dressing up? Why and why not?
A: I like dressing up, because I think wearing a clothes tidy is important also I like it.



-어제 뭐 했니?
What did you do yesterday?
-놀이 공원에 갔었어. 사진 엄청 많이 찍었어.내가 보여줄게.
I went to amusement park. I took a lot of pictures. I'll show you.
-멋있다! 너는 뭐 했니?
Cool! What did you do?
교정내용

Q;Do you like dressing up? Why and why not?

A: I like dressing up, because I think wearing a clothes tidy is important also I like it.

 

 

-어제 뭐 했니?

What did you do yesterday? (Correct)

-놀이 공원에 갔었어. 사진 엄청 많이 찍었어.내가 보여줄게.

I went to amusement park. I took a lot of pictures. I'll show you. =>I went to an amusement park. I took a lot of pictures. I'll show you them. => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-멋있다! 너는 뭐 했니?

Cool! What did you do? (Correct)​ 

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