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제 목 4/23hw
교정강사 Jeniffer(C)
등록일 2021-06-06
작성글 A. Are you a health-conscious person?

Yes, I am a health conscious person. To put it more positively, I'm a person who enjoys taking care of health and lives thinking it's necessary for life. For example, my current interest is not to drink sweet drinks as much as I can. Things like coke, green tea latte, juice. Also, I want to make abs, so I'm working hard to strengthen my abs
B. Make these sentences into English.

-배심원은 그를 살인죄로 판결했다.
The jury decided him guilty of murder.

-보안요원들이 그들의 가방을 조사했다.
Security guards searched their bags.

-전화가 작동이 안 된다.
The phone isn't working.
교정내용

A. Are you a health-conscious person?

 

Yes, I am a health conscious person. To put it more positively, I'm a person who enjoys taking care of health and lives thinking it's necessary for life. For example, my current interest is not to drink sweet drinks as much as I can. Things like coke, green tea latte, juice. Also, I want to make abs, so I'm working hard to strengthen my abs​. 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

 

-배심원은 그를 살인죄로 판결했다.

The jury decided him guilty of murder. ---> The jury found him guilty of murder.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

-보안요원들이 그들의 가방을 조사했다.

Security guards searched their bags. ---> The security guards checked their bags.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

-전화가 작동이 안 된다.

The phone isn't working.

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