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교정강사 Jeniffer(C)
등록일 2021-06-06
작성글 1.
The best accommodation I stayed in was the hotel I visited with my friend in last year August to rest for two nights and three days. The hotel was near the beach and wasn't very spacious, but the mood was good. Maybe I think it's the best accommodation because of the memories there.

2. Sorry I deleted Korean. But in regular order!

She is always wanted to play Juliet.

I was deeply touched by the movie.

We don't handle such items.
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The best accommodation I stayed in was the hotel I visited with my friend last year August we took a rest for two nights and three days. The hotel was near the beach and wasn't very spacious, but the mood was good. Maybe I think it's the best accommodation because of the memories there. 

 

She is always wanted to play Juliet. ---> She had always wanted to play Juliet.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

I was deeply touched by the movie.---> I was deeply moved by the movie.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

We don't handle such items. ---> We don't carry that item.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

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