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제 목 Homework - 2021.06.07 (Lydia)
교정강사 Noemi(C)
등록일 2021-06-08
작성글 A. Do you think men or women are the best drivers? Why?
- I disagree that sex is important to drive. I think that cautiousness is a more important character of dest driver.

B. Make these sentences into English.
-그는 영어선생님에게 홀딱 반했습니다. (He was nuts about the English teacher.)
-저희 사진 좀 찍어 주시겠어요? (Would you take our picture?)
-낮잠 좀 자고 싶어. (I want to take a nap.)
교정내용

A. Do you think men or women are the best drivers? Why?

 - I disagree that sex is important to drive. 

  => I disagree that sex is important when it comes to driving.

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.     

 

I think that cautiousness is a more important character of dest driver. 

  => I think that cautiousness should be a more important quality of the best driver. ​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.     

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

-그는 영어선생님에게 홀딱 반했습니다. (He was nuts about the English teacher.)

  => He had a crush on his English teacher.​​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.     

 

-저희 사진 좀 찍어 주시겠어요? (Would you take our picture?)

  => Could you take a picture of us?​

  => Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it.

 

-낮잠 좀 자고 싶어. (I want to take a nap.)

  => I'd like to take a nap.​

  => Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it.​ 

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