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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-04-07
작성글 It's an election day. We should vote mayor in Seoul and Busan. As I live in Seoul, our family members voted for one of candidates in Seoul.
I voted for No 7 Her kyung young, who announced to give us money monthly.
Well, after election my daughter and I stopped by the grocery store and bought some oranges and cookies.
We took them to my apartment on foot. Chery blossoms on the street are beautiful.

(04/07/21)
-우리는 서로를 거의 보지 않는다.
-We rarely see each other.

-우리나라에서는 드물게 지진이 일어난다.
-Earthquake is rarely happened in our country.

-넌 나를 다시는 보지 않을 거야.
-You are not going to see me again.

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It's election day. We should vote for a mayor in Seoul and Busan. As I live in Seoul, our family members voted for one of candidates in Seoul. I voted for No. 7 Her name is Kyung young, who announced to give us money monthly. Well, after the election my daughter and I dropped by to the grocery store and bought some oranges and cookies. We took them to my apartment on foot. Chery blossoms on the street are beautiful. 

 

(04/07/21)

-우리는 서로를 거의 보지 않는다. -We rarely see each other. -> We hardly see each other.

 

 

-우리나라에서는 드물게 지진이 일어난다. -Earthquake is rarely happened in our country. -> Earthquakes rarely occurs in my country.

 

 

- 나를 다시는 보지 않을 거야.

-You are not going to see me again. -> You will never see me again.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it. 

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