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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-06-13
작성글 It is still hot today. So I already took a cold shower 2 times.
By the way, I bought DoSan company stocks with a big money. I read the comments related with this stock on the board.
They said, the price is going to be up so they can grow their money. But the other people didn't think so. They were worried about money loss.
Of course, I want to make money with this company stock. Actually, I didn't sleep well last night. I was too much focused on the stock stuffs. This ruined my sleep. When I got up in the morning, I finally wanted to sell all of the stocks tomorrow. After selling the stocks, I'll buy Samsung company stocks with that money. I am sure that I don't lose money with Samsung stocks. Honestly, I didn't earn money so far.
Maybe I'd better not buy stocks from now on. Have fun..
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It is still hot today. So, I already took a cold shower twice. By the way, I bought DoSan company stocks for a large amount of money. I read the comments related with this stock on the board. They said, the price was going to increase so they could grow their money. But the other people didn't think so. They were worried about money loss. Of course, I want to make money with this company’s stock. Actually, I didn't sleep well last night. I was too much focused on the stock stuffs. This ruined my sleep. When I got up in the morning, I finally wanted to sell all of the stocks tomorrow. After selling the stocks, I'll buy Samsung company’s stocks with that money. I am sure that I don't lose money with Samsung stocks. Honestly, I didn't earn money so far. Maybe I'd better not buy stocks from now on. Have fun.

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