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교정강사 Vanessa(D)
등록일 2021-06-14
작성글 I have a good weekend.
I play with my brother and i play a big puzzle.
it was very fun and happy.
My little brother said me "mingo".
"Mingo" is the dinosaurs are come to the earth.
He hit the dinosaurs.
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I had a good weekend. I played with my brother and we played a big puzzle. It was very fun and we're happy!

My little brother said that "Mingo" to me. Mingo means a dinosaur. He hits the dinosaurs.

 

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