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제 목 | Hi |
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교정강사 | Erica(C) |
등록일 | 2021-06-17 |
작성글 |
Hi, It is cool today and I feel good. I was back to here in Seoul yesterday from my hometown. I was happy seeing my mom. She is healthy but she is lonely because she lives alone. She has nobody to talk with at home. According to her, she watches TV in the evening and works in the field daytime. She is 84 years old now. Whenever I think of my mom, I miss her very much. I saw her tears on the eyes when we left her yesterday. I made a good memory with her. I bought a rice table for her. She wanted it. When our whole family members get together there, we will need it. Of course, she has old one but it is a little bit small. She was satisfied with the stuff and I was happy, too. She said, money is good, because we pay for the happiness with money. That is why everyone loves money. Bye |
교정내용 |
Hi, It is cool today and I feel good. I got back here in Seoul yesterday from my hometown. I was happy seeing my mom. She is healthy but she is lonely because she lives alone. She has nobody to talk with at home. According to her, she watches TV in the evening and works in the field in daytime. She is 84 years old now. Whenever I think of my mom, I miss her very much. I saw her tears on her eyes when we left her yesterday. I made a good memory with her. I bought a rice table for her. She wanted it. When our whole family members get together there, we need it. Of course, she has old one but it is a little bit small. She was satisfied with the stuff and I was happy, too. She said, money was good because we pay for the happiness with money. That is why everyone loves money. Bye |
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