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제 목 What could be done to prove that the message in the bottle was real?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-06-17
작성글 A.) What could be done to prove that the message in the bottle was real?

No other way can't be thought to prove it than finding another paper or document
which include Mathilld's handwriting.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(06/09/21)

-상사와 상의하고 나서 답을 드리겠습니다.
I will reply to you after cosulting my boss.

-최종 제안을 거절하겠습니다.
I will reject the final proposal.

-죄송하지만, 조건들이 저희 회사의 이익에 반합니다.
I am sorry that the terms are against our profit.
교정내용

A.) What could be done to prove that the message in the bottle was real? 

 

No other way can't be thought to prove it than finding another paper or document 

which include Mathilld's handwriting.

 

=> No other way can't be thought to prove it than finding another papers or documents which include Mathilde's handwriting.

 B.) Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (06/09/21)

 

-상사와 상의하고 나서 답을 드리겠습니다.

I will reply to you after cosulting my boss.

 

=> I will return to you after I consult my boss.

-최종 제안을 거절하겠습니다.

I will reject the final proposal.

 

OR 

=> We will refuse your final offer.

 

-죄송하지만, 조건들이 저희 회사의 이익에 반합니다.

I am sorry that the terms are against our profit. 

 

=> I'm sorry, but the conditions are against the interests of our company.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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