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제 목 | ()^v^() Luna's homework ! |
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교정강사 | Kristina(C) |
등록일 | 2021-06-17 |
작성글 |
-What musical instruments can you play? Do you enjoy playing it? Kindly explain your answer. I can play flute and ukulele, and ocarina. And I learned guitar and violin for a few months. I love music, so I enjoy playing it. And I also want to learn oboe and piccolo, chello. (06/17/21) -건강 전문가들은 흡연자들에게 경고했다. Health masters warned smokers. -두꺼운 옷은 추위로부터 당신을 보호한다. Thick clothes protect them from cold. |
교정내용 |
What musical instruments can you play? Do you enjoy playing it? I can play flute and ukulele, and ocarina. *I can play the flute, the ukulele, and the ocarina. ~>This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. And I learned guitar and violin for a few months. *I learned how to play the guitar and the violin for a few months. ~> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically. I love music, so I enjoy playing it. *I love music, so enjoy playing (musical instruments). ~>This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. And I also want to learn oboe and piccolo, chello. *I also want to learn how to play the oboe, the piccolo, and the cello.
(06/17/21) -건강 전문가들은 흡연자들에게 경고했다. Health masters warned smokers. *Health experts warned smokers. ~> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/expression. -두꺼운 옷은 추위로부터 당신을 보호한다. Thick clothes protect them from cold. *Thick clothing protects you from the cold. ~> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/expression. |
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