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제 목 What can be done to control illegal migration?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-06-17
작성글 A.) What can be done to control illegal migration?

Lifting borders would be the only way to prevent the illegal migration.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(06/14/21)

-송장일로부터 한 달 후에 대금을 지불해주시면 됩니다.
You can make a payment a month after the invoice date.

-해외주문은 선불이며 현금이나 수표로 결제하셔야 합니다.
Overseas purchase must be paid in advance by cash or check.

-이번이 첫거래라 외상은 안됩니다.
This is the first transaction so credit is not allowed.
교정내용

A.) What can be done to control illegal migration? 

 

Lifting borders would be the only way to prevent the illegal migration. 

 B.) Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (06/14/21)

 

-송장일로부터 한 달 후에 대금을 지불해주시면 됩니다.

You can make a payment a month after the invoice date. 

OR 

=> Payment is due a month from the date of invoice.

 

-해외주문은 선불이며 현금이나 수표로 결제하셔야 합니다.

Overseas purchase must be paid in advance by cash or check. 

OR 

=> International orders must be prepaid by cash or check.

 

-이번이 첫거래라 외상은 안됩니다.

This is the first transaction so credit is not allowed. 

OR 

=> As this is our first deal together, purchase through credit is not an option.

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• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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